Revising and Editing Instructional Videos Reviewed by Teachers

University of North Carolina

Proofreading

For Students 9th - Higher Ed Standards

How does proofreading differ from revising or editing a paper? A short video explains the importance of proofreading and offers a few key strategies to help writers become better proofreaders. The video contains think-alouds to help...

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TED-Ed

The Science of Macaroni Salad: What's in a Molecule?

For Students 4th - 9th Standards

After showing they quick-paced featurette on the breaking of bonds, hold a discussion using the accompanying Think questions. Complex molecules are broken down into smaller molecules during digestion. There are six main molecules that...

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Sophia Learning

Sophia: Revising a Thesis Statement

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video lesson focuses on revising and editing your paper, especially your thesis statement. It outlines a 3-step process in which the writer reads and answers specific questions about the body of the paper, then answers questions...

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Imagine Learning Classroom

Learn Zillion: Revise a Narrative Story by Rereading the Draft

For Students 2nd Standards

In this lesson, you will learn how to revise a narrative reading response by rereading and asking yourself, 'What details can I add to make my story stronger and are there any details I can remove?' Login gives access to a slideshow as...

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Sophia: Goals of Revision

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This lesson introduces the importance of revision in the writing process. [6:46] CCSS.ELA-Literacy.CCRA.W.5; CCSS.ELA-Literacy.WHST.6-8.5 Develop and strengthen writing

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Sophia: Revision Techniques: Peer Feedback

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video is an instructional writing lesson to teach students how to revise a paper based on another peer's feedback. The instructor provides three steps to follow after peer feedback is given. The instructor also provides additional...

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Sophia: Revision Techniques: Peer Feedback

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

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Sophia: Revision Techniques: Using a Checklist

For Students 9th - 10th

This lesson discusses how to revise a paper using a checklist. [8:44]

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Sophia: Revising a Conclusion

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This lesson discusses improve a conclusion through revision. [18:45]

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Yossarian the Grammarian

Yossarian the Grammarian: More on Restrictive Elements, Grammar

For Students 9th - 10th

This video lesson from Yossarian the Grammarian demonstrates how to punctuate restrictive clauses and phrases. He also show the viewer how to revise restrictive clauses for clarity. [7:24]

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Sophia Learning

Sophia: Revising Topic Sentences

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This lesson explains how to edit a topic sentence to make it more effective. [7:08]

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Sophia: Concise Language: Avoiding Redundancy

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This screencast offers several methods to help readers spot and fix redundancy in their writing. She discusses why concise writing is important, and specific ways to edit for a more expressive, concise text. Includes short quiz. [3:32]

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Sophia: Editing Techniques: Reading Out Loud

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video lesson discusses the benefits of reading a composition out loud as an editing technique. [7:55]

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Yossarian the Grammarian

Yossarian the Grammarian: Adverbs and Ambiguity

For Students 9th - 10th

This video lesson from Yossarian the Grammarian demonstrates how clarify and edit adverbs so that they are not ambiguous in a sentence.

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Sophia Learning

Sophia: Editing Techniques: Meeting the Assignment

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video lesson discusses reviewing a composition to ensure that it meets the assignment. [9:00]

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Yossarian the Grammarian

Coordinating Conjunctions and Comma Splices: English Grammar Lesson

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video lesson from Yossarian the Grammarian explains how to use coordinating conjunctions correctly and avoid using comma splices.

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Yossarian the Grammarian: Active Voice and Passive Voice: English Grammar

For Students 9th - 10th Standards

This video lesson from Yossarian the Grammarian demonstrates how to distinguish between the active voice and the passive voice when writing sentences and paragraphs. He also shows how to edit errors that involve the active and passive...

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