Sophia: Revising Thesis and Topic Sentences

This tutorial focuses on revising the thesis and topic sentences using two videos and two slideshows. The first video discusses a 3-step revising process for making sure the thesis fits the paper; the second video focuses on what constitutes an effective thesis and how to write one. The first slideshow presents information about the purpose of topic sentences and how to write effective ones; the second slideshow discusses how to revise topic sentences to match the thesis. Real Player is required.